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RE: I made this story for Starcraft...Enjoy. (Hey, Fin.I apologize for using your name for a charact 8/26/03 10:52am
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Don't twist his words into something contructive, it's just not there.

 

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RE: I made this story for Starcraft...Enjoy. (Hey, Fin.I apologize for using your name for a charact 8/26/03 10:54am
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No, I'm saying I'll take it seriously when he does. Until then, I stand by my first remark. It's fucking horrible.

 

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RE: I made this story for Starcraft...Enjoy. (Hey, Fin.I apologize for using your name for a charact 8/26/03 2:37pm
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and so I said " wouldn't it be a wet-dream if [P] combined his mad photoshop skills and ability to mock people into some kind of Starcraft fan fiction orgy? "

 

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RE: I made this story for Starcraft...Enjoy. (Hey, Fin.I apologize for using your name for a charact 8/26/03 3:36pm
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RE: I made this story for Starcraft...Enjoy. (Hey, Fin.I apologize for using your name for a charact 8/26/03 5:01pm
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That's a fun map.

 

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RE: I made this story for Starcraft...Enjoy. (Hey, Fin.I apologize for using your name for a charact 8/26/03 5:05pm
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ROFL... good one.

 

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RE: I made this story for Starcraft...Enjoy. (Hey, Fin.I apologize for using your name for a charact 8/26/03 6:15pm
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My love for you is like a truck

 

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RE: I made this story for Starcraft...Enjoy. (Hey, Fin.I apologize for using your name for a charact 8/26/03 6:49pm
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Ditto. Only I'm usually not vocal about it at all.

 

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RE: I made this story for Starcraft...Enjoy. (Hey, Fin.I apologize for using your name for a charact 8/26/03 7:45pm
Nice to know, I'm loved here and that i'm talentless hack. Thanks guys. I love you too.

 
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RE: I made this story for Starcraft...Enjoy. (Hey, Fin.I apologize for using your name for a charact 8/26/03 8:21pm
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Like [P] said, the story looks like you don't really give a shit. You didn't check the spelling or grammar, and you didn't give it a decent formatting.

If your story looks like it doesn't matter to you, why would we like it?

 

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RE: I made this story for Starcraft...Enjoy. (Hey, Fin.I apologize for using your name for a charact 8/27/03 6:03am
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I would've liked it if he was a ninja.

 

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RE: I made this story for Starcraft...Enjoy. (Hey, Fin.I apologize for using your name for a charact 8/27/03 6:58am
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Here's some reasons why it really is horrible:
Your formatting of the text is a disaster.
You switch tenses halfway through from the present to the past tense. You don't do that.
You're relying on a game to back up your story. Fanfiction practically always sucks.
You don't focus enough on anything to draw the reader in.
Your characters seem unrealistic and shallow.
You writing lacks the flow required to make the things you write believable. Try using better adjectives, flow is very important.
There doesn't seem to be much of a plot.
As for continuing it, please, not until you've refined this part to be acceptable.

 

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